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This is what i have so far. Any changes or suggestions just let me know.While I was writing it i found it hard to make humorous so ill need suggestions on that and when laura goes to the zoo i was wondering if there should be some dialog or just actions.

Scene II: Going To School

(LAURA is sleeping

AMANDA enters)

AMANDA

Rise and shine, rise and shine. Amanda hurry up and get ready for school.

LAURA

Yes mother.

AManda

Oh, go wake up your brother so he can get ready for work.

Laura

(LAURA walks into the leaving room to wake TOM)                                                                                              Come one Tom get up before mom gets mad.

TOM

Five more minutes.

(TOM goes back to sleep

LAURA leaves gets ready for school by the mirror)

AMANDA

          (AMANDA walks to LAURA)

Laura you ready for school yet. Here’s some coffee too keep you awake.(AMANDA hands the thermos to LAURA)

LAURA

Thank you mother. Okay im leaving now bye.

(LAURA instead of going to school head over to the ZOO)

random guy

(As LAURA walks to the ZOO)

Nice weather today isn’t it?

(LAURA speeds up and walks away without saying anything)

LAURA

(LAURa walks up to the penguin cage)

????????

          (LAURA enters the apartments, no one is home)

LAURA

Mom’s not home yet, I guess I’ll put some music.
          (LAURA goes to her laptop and play some music and              starts playing with her glass menagerie)

AMANDA

(AMANDA walks in and LAURA rushes to turn off the music and starts typing)

How was school?

Laura

Ahhh school, school was good.

AMANDA

Really, what did you do today?

                        LAURA

Today weeeeee learned a new format.

AMANDA

(AMANDA walks up to the laptop and takes it)

I went to the business school and ask your teacher how you were doing. And she didn’t know who you were. But that there was this very shy girl that got sick during the first test and never came back. What have you been doing?

LAURA

Im so sorry I just didn’t want to disappoint you and see that look on your face. As for what I did, I just walked most of the time.

AMANDA

You walked for 10 hours every day.

LAURA

Well sometimes I would go to the mall and today I went to the zoo to see the penguins.

AMANDA

Laura now a day everyone needs some sort of education. Without an education you don’t have many choices. Have you thought of marrying anyone Laura?

laura

You know I can’t talk to people. I get nervous trying to talk to anybody.

amanda

Well have you tried finding someone online like on Facebook. This way you don’t have to talk to anybody.

Laura

Since you mention online there is this guy I met in this game I play. He seems nice but I don’t he lives around here.

Amanda

Those people are probably weirdos in real life, I’ll just ask your brother to see if he knows anyone single for you.

THE END